harsh and tough,
Straight as pony hair
but pretty rough.
Words of promise were
fair from oneside,
Blunder and misery
from the other side.
Waited every moment
for her, all the while.
From dawn to dusk
he lost his smile.
Killed his hunger with
pains and scares,
Burried his thirst with
aches and tears.
Appealed himself,should
have loved her more,
So to change her soul
till the core.
افماي
Your a beautiful poet! Thank you for sharing
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Thank you very much,this appreciation means a lot to me 🙂
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I love this poem and this picture very much!
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🙂
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“Burried his thirst with aches and tears.”
For some reason, i find this line so subtle yet so energetic at the same time!
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I dont know what to say!😅
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great choice of words and metaphors.. keep them coming 🙂
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NICE….
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This is so deeply written. 🙂
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Beautiful 👌
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Very thought-provoking! Keep it up 🙂
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